IT WAS GREAT WITH AL OT OTF DEATAILS AND GREAT VOICE i LEARNED ALOT FROM IT LIKE HOW SHEDUFS WERE LIKE CATAPULTS. gREAT PICTURES TO BUT YOU STILL NEEDTO ADD ONE MORE PHARGRAPH i THINK BECAUSE YOU WERE SUPPOST TO HAVE FIVE. BUT OVERALL IT WAS FANTASTIC. FROM:collin w TO:collin r see ya collin from collin
You need more voice and your pole is closed but man that was cool.